Syringes's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[It's over nine thousand!]

Well

First off, the 'its over 9000' isnt that funny anymore :/

but besides that, it almost looks like you made a horrible copy of the actually cartoon, make a parody not a copy. Its just nothing special...

DavidFlash responds:

You're right.
I made this animation when I couldn't use flash

[November (The Orphan Cat)]

LOOOOL

Anyone who doesnt get this and gave this a 0 or 1 SHOULD get their comment removed for being so unfair. Ever heard of longcat? And do you REALIZE how well it was drawn and colored? I think people need to also look at your skills rather than base most of your score on story. Amazing job, made me laugh.

[Yellow Vs. Orange]

Hmm

To be honest, you animated nicely since you used a mouse, but to ALSO be honest.. this does not deserve front page. :/ The only thing that was OK was the animation, I wonder if this was chosen cause nothing else was any good this week.

[SS - The Flower of Life]

Mehh

This is an extremely touchy subject. So since I dont believe in any of this Ill give you a fair rating anyway. It was a bit entertaining, even though I am completely unconvinced. You were able to find a lot of great information, and even if I dont believe in all this 'God' stuff it was interesting to pretend if it were true. You obviously have SOME people convinced that this is real, not me of course. I like the animation it was a little entertaining as well. But thats about it. Since im Atheist I am going to be a little bias in my rating, JS.

[Best School Day Ever]

DDDD

You are VERY talented, thats all i have to say.

[Pico Jones]

Nice!

I really enjoyed what you did here! Although I have some issues;

1. The audio was bad quality, and really loud at times.
2. The main character looked nothing like Pico, and I got confused on who was who sometimes when they were wearing the masks.
3. The art was great but sometimes Pico's face would look a bit deformed, try to keep it consistant the same.

But besides that, i really liked this, try to make Pico's hair more orange, i know you want a natural look but hair can naturally look redder than that, and his skin was a bit too dark, Pico is a lot more pale. Keep that in mind so when we watch your Pico stuff, we wont be confused on where Pico even is :D GJ! I look forward to more of this. We need more artists like you!

[Warriors of the Portal]

Wow

That shows some real skill, and dedication. I hope I see more of this, incredible work, lighting, colors. I loved it!

[An Animation Revolution]

Wow

I like your way of getting a point across :D

[GOLEM]

Ill do it this way

Animation: 4, you didnt do a lot of this so its hard to say.

Art: 6 your art wasnt that bad, it could use some better detail though, I found some scenes interesting and others not.

Story: 1 That was terrible, this is the main part of any flash, the story. This was like a teaser, a trailer, it was nothing. I know you plan to have more to add on in the future, but I hope the rest of your animations are longer and have more story in them in the future, this first episode was just BAD. No offense, I really do see you have potential, but spend more time on it, you are not bound by any time, no one is waiting for yout o be done, you have all the time in the world to post animations, next time take your time to develop a nice story, and a long one.

I dont know WHY or HOW this made it to the front page, it does not deserve to take daily 4th place, unless youre the best they could find. Who knows, but keep at it, I know you can do better than that from what Ive seen.

4/10

3/5