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HELP! I need flash..story ideas.

Posted by Syringes - February 28th, 2010


I HAVE SKYPE: SillyZombie (I think..)
Summary: I need some suggestions for my story.

Ok so I am making a flash and for anyone who has played Borderlands, my favorite game currently (I beat it but I cant stop playing it) then you may notice a resemblance.

I am making a post apocalyptic cartoon which will be done in several episodes, it will have one character and mutated creatures with bandits. It will kind of look like its back then in the old western type of days(With the good the bad and the ugly soundtrack of course!) as well because there is a lot of 'desert' and such from a bomb, typical... i know @_@ and the main character has radiation inside of him, his left eye is becoming a yellowish color while the right remains normal green, he talks about his past and also so you can get a good idea of what happened in the story and how it became a wasteland setting. Also you can learn of his personality... But anyway, he is venturing around because he is a bounty hunter, he kills bandits when he is hired by towns to do so, he kills mutated creatures and his main goal is to find out what is making them bigger and stronger and more of them over all. In the meantime the girl he lost in his past i want her to have a place in the story as well, I wanna create some kind of twist with her but I dont know what.

Thats what I have so far but any ideas would be amazing so throw them out to me, this animation will show all my skills I have gathered from everyone's critique and suggestions, the animation will have conflicts, details, textures, more detail tot he characters, personalities, more movement rather than just one thing, and a clear story line!!! But I suck at story line so PLEASE help me.

I am very far into the animation already btw :]

If anyone helps I will add their name into the description thanking them, even if i dont use your idea I shall still put you in. (Dont just suggest crap to me to get your name in the description though.. :/ )

To see what the character looks like and to get an idea of the creatures look at this picture(Down there)
It will be the cover.

His eyes are different from how I described because I didnt think of this animation until after I made it xD
(Image is smaller than the original because post wont let me make it too big.)

PS: This is the first time I have posted on the front page I hope it wasnt a bad idea.. im really looking for help and more critique no spam please D: Unless its real spam that'd be interesting...

HELP! I need flash..story ideas.


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Have a switch implanted into her back that will make another bomb go off...and have him press it during sex. OPPS

That just made me laugh D:

Im afraid of getting a lot of this :[

If you want I will sit down with you later today and hammer some ideas out..I'm too tired atm to care too much.

Ok cool that sounds actually like an awesome idea and I could show you part of the animation if can. :]]]

Thanks for the offer just lemme know whenever you get a chance.

How about when you kill mutants they can re-assemble back it to a single mutant... so the most powerful mutations join together to make bigger mutant monster things. GOOD IDEA CHRIS GUY

Not a bad idea actually I kind of kind that >]]]] Ill think about it and maybe fit it in! Thank you.

A twist hmm? Well it will be kinda stupid if the girl is working with the mutants, so I would have to say that she's ONE of the bandits that the main character has to kill, but realized who she is before he makes the final blow. As for the mutants, they feed off of the radiation. If you also played Fallout 3, combined it with Borderlands and you could make a pretty good storyline.

OH! I like it!! <33 Thanks! You know whats funny is I played fallout3 as well, good game I suck at it though XD Thanks! Ill definitely do that, thats a must.

What if the mutants are all part of a larger hive, and in order to grow in number they lure bandits/humans into traps and more or less force them into hibernation in organic "cells". Those that don't accept the change are left in comas to become food and nutrition, slowly decaying in their "coffins" and providing the mutants with sustenance and strength.

As for the girl, she's been abducted and subverted to the side of the mutants, acting as the mouthpiece and voice for the hive's central intelligence yet still remaining human. Without her, the hive doesn't function properly/ He finds her wandering around aimlessly, babbling, brings her back to her senses and she tells him that she can help lead him to the source of the mutants. Of course, the act of returning reconnects her to the hive and things get worse from there as you see fit.

....but they're just suggestions, heh.

I like that too! OMG! You guys are amazing. Maybe I can kind of combine that with Vampyro's idea somehow >]] I like them both.

I definitely like the hive idea though.

Not sure about the girl... I might end up making her a bandit, hmm, we'll see XD

Its hard to decide :'D

what about this: She decided to join a bandit clan because it was her only chance of survival. Main character gets assigned to whipe out the leader of this clan, and runs into the girl, he recognizes her, but she does not recognize him because of his mutations from the radiation. He decides to keep an eye out for her and notices she isn't happy to be in the clan. He decides it is time for a small reunion...

I'd be happy making a clear story line/plot for you including a good background of the characters. so if you like it and want me to do so, just PM me or respond.

by the way, It's difficult to keep people intrested in one character for a long time.
great series as EFN avoid this by giving the main character a talking sword and some sort of split personality.

anyways, good luck with your project.

xD Alright, thanks! I like that as well, Ill give it a try. You do interest me maybe you can give me some help, the character (Main character's name is now Ace) is kind of having the 'cloud strife' personality right now and thats kind of an annoying personality... but then again i want him to end up being the 'bad ass' person xD just not too bad ass... but he also has that funny shy style because he hasnt been social with lots of people so if a girl tries to seduce him he'd end up getting nervous or something, Im so bad at making personalities its not even funny. I obviously need help. I dont think there will be any talking sword XD or split personality.

i'd liek to help! :)
i didnt submit any recent flash projects (all of them were from 08 tho uploaded recently) tho please take a look at my art to understand my style,
looking at your style i'd say we're quite close :P

answer back please, thanks! :D

Lawl ill look around, thank! ^^

You can try this: She travels to the city where she lived before the cataclism to kill a monster and there she discovers that his mother has been mutaten into the psicotic monster she must kill. She cant do it and discovers that the isolation, the lack of food and radiation made the people turn into mindless creatures. His extrange eye his the first step to become a monster a she decide to suicide.

Well I do wonder what Ill do with the radiation in him since he wanders out into restricted places unprotected so i will have it infect him slowly. Thanks for the suggestions ^^ Ill keep them in mind too, not sure if suicide will be my favorite idea cause I dont think I want them to die so early.

I messaged you :)

Alright Ill see :3

Make it so that he has to kill the girl to stop the mutants.

Well I dont know if I want her to have a huuuge connection with the mutants but Ill keep it in mind if I need it.

What if the male protagonist finds one of his girlfriends artifacts like a teddy bear, or a locket with her picture in it. And he thinks that she's still alive somewhere?

Thats not a bad idea o.o I might use that

Not much of an idea but heres something. Make it like... a suivivor man meets cowboys and idians meets robbers meets Sci-fi movie night :D Or the girl could be a scientist who trys to learn more and more about teh mutants to cure them but in the proccese has to survie and risks getting killed by them each time... Wait that sounds like "I am Legend".... Danmit i cant think of anything original to much movies D: eh i tried..

XDDD Kind of like I am legend but its good o__o;

I want to see what would happen if the girl was one of the bandits....

and also the reason why the creatures rose to such epic power. :P

Glad to hear seems everyone wants it, well almost everyone I think Imma do it then.

Ok how about this for an idea

Ace was a young man living in his town of ENTERGENERICTOWNNAME. The town was attacked by mutated creatures quite often, but the town people were well armed usually fought off the creatures easily, but one night the creatures were bigger, meaner, and more organized than usual. That night more than half the town died, including most of Ace's family. Realizing that the creatures were organized and that somebody must be behind it, he grabbed a gun and set off to find them.

The girl is a very smart childhood friend of Ace who lived in the same town as he did. She is the one who helped Ace realize that the creatures were organized and told him that someone was probably behind it. After she finds out Ace left town by himself, she feels somewhat guilty and goes after him. She decides the best way to find him is by looking for where the creatures came from herself. She being much smarter than Ace finds it quite fast.

The Source of the organized creatures is gang operating out of a genetic engineering facility. The gang leader, realizing the potential of such a place, used it to create more powerful creatures and powerful people to lead the creatures.

Upon finding this facility, Ace's friend WHATSHERNAME decides to try and join the gang. She, realizing the potential of such a place, used it to create cure for radiation and disease. The gang leader becomes increasingly suspicious of her and has his men watch her. This makes it difficult for her to get her cure to the people. She decides that her only way for her to get the cure out is to help the gang go on raids.

Ace is now doing odd jobs and looking for any bounties just to get by. One day he hears about a group of mutated creatures being lead by a raiding caravan and goes after it hoping to find out more about the creatures that attacked his town. He finds the caravan and quickly becomes overpowered and outnumbered. WHATSHERNAME realizes that the man attacking the caravan is her childhood friend Ace and that Ace may be her only way of getting the cure out. She throws the vial containing the cure at him, it hits him in the face, and she calls for a retreat.

Ace does not realize what has happened to him. His eye changed color, his body is now changing resulting a lot of pain, and all this was done by what looked to be his childhood friend. Soon after the pain goes away, and he feels healthier, stronger, and faster, but the color change does not go away. In fact, it gets worse. In a world where most things want to kill, rob, and/or eat you, you tend to be wary of strange things, and a stranger looking like Ace coming into your town is definitely a strange thing. He must prove himself, while trying to find out more about what happened to him, where the gang is at, and who this woman that looked like his friend is.

Sorry that was so long, take from it what you will.

WOW! That was amazing!! XD Thank you! I am going to pick a bunch of pieces from this and use them thank you so much.

I dunno 'bout anything to suggest.
I bet can bet this is gonna be epic shiz. :D

xD I hope so because I am working hard on it, It wont be as good as many series but.. imma try DD:

OK, so I see that now, after reading a ton of the ideas that were sent, The one I have suggested was already taken. How about you make the girl like the engineer who made the bomb in the first place (not the person who caused the apocalypse, there's a difference.) and thus explains why she is the reason the epic power beasts rose to such high and epic power, except you make her look like she is just innocent until the end.

Typical, I know :/

good luck anyway.

Hmm, Im not sure if I want her to have made the bomb, it takes place during a war and such so I dont think she is going to be the cause of it xP But thanks for the idea ^^ It always helps. :]

don't drag it out, cut to the chase. people are too ADD on the internet nowadays

Lawl I know what you mean.

Don't have a lot of ideas for this one that don't sound like things people have already said. The shot you posted looks awesome though If you ever feel like animating another series for fun, I've got the first 3 episodes written and am looking for an animator. Just pm me if you're interested. :) Also, I do VAing if you need that too.

Good luck!

Thanks! Ill keep that in mind for sure!

tom fulp vs. your mom

xD Maybe I can ma that for real after this. No lies DDD:

Do you have a Skype or a yahoo, or an msn?

I have a skype!

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